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Post by Doo on Jan 31, 2019 16:17:42 GMT -5
I like the idea with the garden! Could Tanis get cursed with like an ancient Egyptian amulet?
Do you want to include the Boo Brothers themselves or just reference the film somehow?
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Post by stardustcrusader on Feb 4, 2019 12:22:16 GMT -5
I like the idea with the garden! Could Tanis get cursed with like an ancient Egyptian amulet? Do you want to include the Boo Brothers themselves or just reference the film somehow? 1. Oh, I meant G gets cursed and Tanis helps him 2. Yeah, boo brothers themselves honestly, like this whole shared universe 3. Ok, one thing I also need to be aware of is having a balance of focus between the interns and ghouls. I mean, it is a ghoul school story, so they should be just as prominent and not be like 'side characters'. Any tips to balance that?
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Post by Doo on Feb 4, 2019 18:32:08 GMT -5
2. Have you read the fanfic "The Wolfman of Grimwood" by Mr. Spinner on Fanfiction.net? Honestly that's a great example of how to work in Boo Brothers. www.fanfiction.net/s/13007308/1/The-Wolfman-of-Grimwood3. I would say maybe try to create chapters which focus on different characters each time? E.g. one chapter focuses on the interns, then the next on the girl ghouls, then the next on the interns, etc. Of course, all characters would be in the stories in all chapters, but the focus would just shift from chapter to chapter. Or were you thinking of just having thi be a one-shot/chapterless fic?
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Post by stardustcrusader on Feb 7, 2019 11:59:27 GMT -5
2. Have you read the fanfic "The Wolfman of Grimwood" by Mr. Spinner on Fanfiction.net? Honestly that's a great example of how to work in Boo Brothers. www.fanfiction.net/s/13007308/1/The-Wolfman-of-Grimwood3. I would say maybe try to create chapters which focus on different characters each time? E.g. one chapter focuses on the interns, then the next on the girl ghouls, then the next on the interns, etc. Of course, all characters would be in the stories in all chapters, but the focus would just shift from chapter to chapter. Or were you thinking of just having thi be a one-shot/chapterless fic? I would like to write it honestly as a story, just working out some ideas. I have some more if I may share. Oh btw, have you seen the doc?
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Post by Doo on Feb 12, 2019 11:56:08 GMT -5
I have some more if I may share. Oh btw, have you seen the doc? I have! It looks good. And yes! Feel free to share whatever ideas you have.
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Post by stardustcrusader on Feb 22, 2019 20:29:02 GMT -5
I have some more if I may share. Oh btw, have you seen the doc? I have! It looks good. And yes! Feel free to share whatever ideas you have. Sorry for the lack of responses. Will do soon
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Post by Doo on Feb 23, 2019 11:43:11 GMT -5
I have! It looks good. And yes! Feel free to share whatever ideas you have. Sorry for the lack of responses. Will do soon No worries
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Post by stardustcrusader on Feb 26, 2019 12:26:06 GMT -5
Sorry for the lack of responses. Will do soon No worries Well, I did have ideas for some other ones, which focus more on the ghouls: 1. Something involving Winnie and the blood moon like perhaps it makes her go crazy or something Since you're a ghoul school fan, any ideas involving them I had another idea for an overall arching narrative, with like Revolta coming back maybe.
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Post by Doo on Feb 26, 2019 14:57:43 GMT -5
Could the blood moon make Winnie go crazy because of hormones? In my own fanfic, I have werewolves' full moon transformation be sort of like the human hormonal cycle. With that idea, could the blood moon just put her over the top then because she is at that adolescent age where hormones are raging and such?
"Since you're a ghoul school fan, any ideas involving them" Who do you mean by "them"?
Revolta returning would be cool. How long after the original Ghoul School film is this fanfic taking place?
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Post by stardustcrusader on Mar 1, 2019 15:13:16 GMT -5
Could the blood moon make Winnie go crazy because of hormones? In my own fanfic, I have werewolves' full moon transformation be sort of like the human hormonal cycle. With that idea, could the blood moon just put her over the top then because she is at that adolescent age where hormones are raging and such? "Since you're a ghoul school fan, any ideas involving them" Who do you mean by "them"? Revolta returning would be cool. How long after the original Ghoul School film is this fanfic taking place? 1. I guess but I'd prefer not to use the word 'hormones', sounds getting past g rating 2. Them, the ghoul monsters 3. A couple years to be exact is what I envionsed
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Post by Doo on Mar 1, 2019 15:37:32 GMT -5
Could the blood moon make Winnie go crazy because of hormones? In my own fanfic, I have werewolves' full moon transformation be sort of like the human hormonal cycle. With that idea, could the blood moon just put her over the top then because she is at that adolescent age where hormones are raging and such? "Since you're a ghoul school fan, any ideas involving them" Who do you mean by "them"? Revolta returning would be cool. How long after the original Ghoul School film is this fanfic taking place? 1. I guess but I'd prefer not to use the word 'hormones', sounds getting past g rating 2. Them, the ghoul monsters 3. A couple years to be exact is what I envionsed 1. Okay, that's fair. Hadn't realized you wanted a G rating (mine is T btw) so best steer clear of that. So could the blood moon turning Winnie crazy involve one (or more) of the interns getting nervous and questioning whether they want to stay. In other words, mistaking Winnie's change as that she's somehow dangerous. 2. The girl ghouls or their parents? It seems implied that the fic would involve the girl ghouls, so I guess I'm not clear on which you mean. 3. How old are you envisioning the girls to be at this point?
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Post by stardustcrusader on Mar 2, 2019 18:08:52 GMT -5
1. I guess but I'd prefer not to use the word 'hormones', sounds getting past g rating 2. Them, the ghoul monsters 3. A couple years to be exact is what I envionsed 1. Okay, that's fair. Hadn't realized you wanted a G rating (mine is T btw) so best steer clear of that. So could the blood moon turning Winnie crazy involve one (or more) of the interns getting nervous and questioning whether they want to stay. In other words, mistaking Winnie's change as that she's somehow dangerous. 2. The girl ghouls or their parents? It seems implied that the fic would involve the girl ghouls, so I guess I'm not clear on which you mean. 3. How old are you envisioning the girls to be at this point? 1. Actually, since I wanted to focus on balancing the cast, I was wondering if maybe it would be better to have one of the winnies friends take prominence in that. And I figured the bloodmoon would make her crazy or more bestial perhaps 2. Girl ghouls 3. Oh, I thought I mentioned that. Based on the recent O.K K.O episode: Sibella/Elsa/Phantasma(18(19?ish)), Winnie(13-14), Tanis(11-12)
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Post by Doo on Mar 5, 2019 14:20:31 GMT -5
1. That's an awesome idea!
2. I just read the document again and I guess you're right that the girls haven't been in any of the fic really. I was mistakenly thinking that they had been. Honestly, I think just having the interns work with the girl ghouls in their different classes would be fun. So like having them teach the girls stuff in the gym, or in different academic classes (I have one course that the ghouls take called "Human Studies" in my fic, so you could take the route of introducing a nontraditional class if you wanted to be creative). Nice job with the document so far btw, everything looks great!
3. Ah okay, gotcha. Sorry if you had already mentioned it and I forgot.
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Post by stardustcrusader on Mar 6, 2019 12:44:45 GMT -5
1. That's an awesome idea! 2. I just read the document again and I guess you're right that the girls haven't been in any of the fic really. I was mistakenly thinking that they had been. Honestly, I think just having the interns work with the girl ghouls in their different classes would be fun. So like having them teach the girls stuff in the gym, or in different academic classes (I have one course that the ghouls take called "Human Studies" in my fic, so you could take the route of introducing a nontraditional class if you wanted to be creative). Nice job with the document so far btw, everything looks great! 3. Ah okay, gotcha. Sorry if you had already mentioned it and I forgot. 1. Thanks, the document is more like my pilot chapter honestly. Though I'm still working on powers for B, any ideas come to mind after having read the doc 2. Those sound interesting. I was also thinking of ways to incorporate other classical monsters elements(i.e invisible man or Jekyll and Hyde). Since those suggestions are more school based, did you have any more adventure style ones?
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Post by scoobnick on Mar 6, 2019 13:48:02 GMT -5
perhaps have two kids that share parts if Jekyll and Hydes personality? say one is normal looking most of the time. then transforms a few days a month, with the other being the reverse. Just some ideas
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