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Post by jonathanmuddlemore on Nov 29, 2018 18:32:46 GMT -5
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Post by Doo on Nov 30, 2018 11:18:09 GMT -5
Very interesting fic! I like how true it stayed to the tone of the original series, which is pretty rare for a fanfic. Looking forward to seeing where this story goes!
Btw, kind of interesting to see your other username, I hadn't made the connection that you were the same person as ConradTerminus. I recognize the username and I feel like we've talked elsewhere before this (maybe Twitter?). It's a small world I guess haha.
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Post by jonathanmuddlemore on Nov 30, 2018 12:25:39 GMT -5
Very interesting fic! I like how true it stayed to the tone of the original series, which is pretty rare for a fanfic. Looking forward to seeing where this story goes! Btw, kind of interesting to see your other username, I hadn't made the connection that you were the same person as ConradTerminus. I recognize the username and I feel like we've talked elsewhere before this (maybe Twitter?). It's a small world I guess haha. We might've. I think it had something to do with Guess Who? But yeah the second chapter was very much me trying to capture a scene from Where Are You. The first chapter was more inspired by the first live action movie which is why Velma and Fred come off as much meaner. I kind of regret that tbh. |
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Post by Doo on Nov 30, 2018 15:31:56 GMT -5
No reason to regret anything. Admittedly I wasn’t as good as writing when I first began my fanfic, but I think I’ve definitely learned from what i did wrong and become a better writer because of it. So don’t beat yourself up too much.  |
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Post by jonathanmuddlemore on Jan 28, 2019 0:35:30 GMT -5
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Post by Doo on Jan 28, 2019 9:11:51 GMT -5
Aww, there are some really cute moments in this chapter. Keep up the good work!
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Post by jonathanmuddlemore on Jun 27, 2019 20:37:15 GMT -5
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Post by Doo on Jun 28, 2019 11:09:35 GMT -5
Very nice chapter! You do a great job of getting down the tone and characters of SDMI in this one. "Velma smoked a cigarette in the back with Shag and Scoob." - I'll admit this line surprised me a bit haha. Not in a bad way, just wasn't expecting it. |
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Post by jonathanmuddlemore on Jun 28, 2019 14:34:25 GMT -5
I just want to promote some other Scooby fanfiction that personally inspired my writing. Just a forewarning that these stories deal with some really heavy themes that you wouldn't typically see in an official Scooby product. Enough
So Long, Old Friend
The Mystery Machine
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Post by jonathanmuddlemore on Feb 19, 2020 16:47:44 GMT -5
So I decided that I know longer saw any future with this story. However, I decided to upload the chapter I was most proud of as a stand-alone. I have big plans for a possible Scooby fanfic in the future. This time with a more clearly defined plot. For now, enjoy www.fanfiction.net/s/13505161/1/The-Backstage-Rage |
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